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Tangled limbs and CD players by ~nubianlover:iconnubianlover:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Spoken Word




.....


We danced in the moonlight for an hour
While others danced in the fake lustre of floodlights
Aimed and following their idiosyncrasies


Love like ours was honest and rampant


Honest; in that you never said you loved me
Rampant; in that all we exchanged was a hundred heated passions


(Our tangled limbs stretched out
To reach for a truth, I never found)


My dark skin slips across your false, pure white complexion
And my thick Othello lips kiss your cracked, rouge cosmetic colouring
My hand parts your thighs and I move on in
To take pleasure in your dark mysteries
And build my own from shadows that caress my back

Shuddering, grimacing

I arch in, to kiss your lips again
Then fall half-comatose, to slouch beside you


Now our tired limbs fall lifeless
Our bated breath slowing
Our hearts still thumping to the beat of Moby
On the three slot CD player

And I see it winking 12:00 o’clock at us


.....
©2004-2009 ~nubianlover
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Author's Comments

a poem...

about my nightly perversions with a girl i know...

though why i do i know not...

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~nubianlover Jun 2, 2004, 12:47:24 PM
in all honesty i forget where i got it from

i have a bunch on my computer so i'm hoping someone will recognise them and link me...

thanks for the comment

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~goodkitty Jun 2, 2004, 2:57:52 PM
wonderfully erotic poem... i love the imagery.

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~nubianlover Jun 2, 2004, 3:04:57 PM
thanks a load

i like the preasure of this one

i have tons more like this to submit

some even better...

thanks for the nice comment

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~g33k-ch1k Jun 2, 2004, 3:12:40 PM
cute.

I would fix the appearance.

:: Toni

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~nubianlover Jun 2, 2004, 3:19:36 PM
how?

you mean bold and italics and stuff?

i need to read the FAQ part, bare with me :D

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~lucky8ballsociety

And a member of

:bulletpurple: ~Soul-Essence
:bulletpurple: *livingpoetsociety
:bulletpurple: ~dark-writing
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~g33k-ch1k Jun 2, 2004, 3:22:45 PM
no no :)

don't read faq :p

I mean the double lines (i'm guessing you wrote this in word or some such) the format just needs cleaning to make it more

line
line

line

and not

line

line


line


Does that make sense?

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You may see a silly fop & a worshipful justice, a griping rook & a grave citizen, a worthy lawyer & an errant pickpocket, a reverend non-conformist & a canting mountebank, all blended together to compose a medley of impertinence -- at the *Coffeehouse
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~nubianlover Jun 2, 2004, 3:26:10 PM
oh shit yer... ok i got ya, well i read FAQ and did italics and bold

i'll sort out the lines now, thanks, its how i have Word set up ;)

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I am a sub-admin of

~lucky8ballsociety

And a member of

:bulletpurple: ~Soul-Essence
:bulletpurple: *livingpoetsociety
:bulletpurple: ~dark-writing
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~g33k-ch1k Jun 2, 2004, 3:29:26 PM
lol @ you :)

welcome to DA!

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You may see a silly fop & a worshipful justice, a griping rook & a grave citizen, a worthy lawyer & an errant pickpocket, a reverend non-conformist & a canting mountebank, all blended together to compose a medley of impertinence -- at the *Coffeehouse
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